100 words challenge

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  1. Ross Mannell (Team 100WC) says:

    Hello Yasmin,

    I see you have discovered how effective imagery can be in the telling of a story. Words can have the power to create images in the minds of your readers. “I was walking somewhere” doesn’t help a reader picture the events but you wrote…

    I was walking somewhere, fields of green stretching as far as the eye can see.

    This made me imagine a person on a hike through the countryside and, as I read on, the scene in my mind grew. Well done.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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