I see you have discovered how effective imagery can be in the telling of a story. Words can have the power to create images in the minds of your readers. “I was walking somewhere” doesn’t help a reader picture the events but you wrote…
I was walking somewhere, fields of green stretching as far as the eye can see.
This made me imagine a person on a hike through the countryside and, as I read on, the scene in my mind grew. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Hello Yasmin,
I see you have discovered how effective imagery can be in the telling of a story. Words can have the power to create images in the minds of your readers. “I was walking somewhere” doesn’t help a reader picture the events but you wrote…
I was walking somewhere, fields of green stretching as far as the eye can see.
This made me imagine a person on a hike through the countryside and, as I read on, the scene in my mind grew. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia