I love the way you wrote it and i love the part where it says little did we know this bike would shape our future forever . Y ou could really become a writer some day .
Asha,
We think your creativity is amazing. For example the part when you came up with it speeding through space. We liked how it was funny when you used the word thingamajig. Keep writing.
Mrs. G. and Class, Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
I love the way you wrote it and i love the part where it says little did we know this bike would shape our future forever . Y ou could really become a writer some day .
Asha,
We think your creativity is amazing. For example the part when you came up with it speeding through space. We liked how it was funny when you used the word thingamajig. Keep writing.
Mrs. G. and Class, Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA