Maryam, We like that your piece was detailed. An example is the back story about the weather. The color change was creative. It is a cliff hanger. We like how it is realistic Mrs. G. and class, Team 100, Guilderland, NY , USA
The sense of mystery is nice.
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Maryam,
We like that your piece was detailed. An example is the back story about the weather. The color change was creative. It is a cliff hanger. We like how it is realistic
Mrs. G. and class, Team 100, Guilderland, NY , USA
The sense of mystery is nice.