What i liked was that you wrote about one day not the year but everyone else wrote about the year . Also i liked the part where it said i was running through the long vines . It made me feel like i was through the vines .
What an interesting story, Mo. I liked the contrast between ‘disastrous’ and ‘hope’, although you left your readers wondering if the crown might bring problems in the future. I like the way you describe running through the long vines and the way the crown was a family heirloom that had been lost for such a long time.
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