THE BOY WHO FELT REALLY ILL

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  1. Caprh says:

    HI ANAYAH I LOVE HOW YOU SAID JACK HAD BEEN WARNED BY HIS PARENTS NOT TO GO OUT BUT JACK DID NOT LISTEN

    AND I LIKE HOW YOU PUT A COMMA AFTER THAT SENTENCE

    WHAT DID HIS PARENTS TO AFTER HE HAD SHUT HIS EYES

    I WOULD LIKE TO HERE MORE

    WELL DONE!!!!!

    KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP

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