The illness

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3 Responses to The illness

  1. Mrs Boyce says:

    What a lovely story, Bowe. Well done.
    It was great that the young girl helped Oliver and I’m delighted that Oliver has found a new friend.
    Great work this week.
    Keep writing.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

  2. Husam says:

    Well done bowe but there are a few mistakes such as how you spelt off wrong and how you spelt anyone as any one. Anyways keep on doing your amazing writings. I think that you can become a writer one day. 🙂


  3. Husam says:

    Sorry I was meant to do your name with a capital b, sorry Bowe

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