Oh dear, I do hope the hero of your story recovered from eating the mushroom, Abdi! Your story is very imaginative and full of good description. I particularly like ‘ravenous as a hungry lion ‘and ‘through his watery eyes’. I can imagine someone eating something in a frenzy too!
Nice work Abdi! It was really creative,
Oh dear, I do hope the hero of your story recovered from eating the mushroom, Abdi! Your story is very imaginative and full of good description. I particularly like ‘ravenous as a hungry lion ‘and ‘through his watery eyes’. I can imagine someone eating something in a frenzy too!