Oh! That must be some castle you visited! well done on building the scary parts in your story.
Hi Fatima! That is quite a fright to have while out collecting leaves. I like how you used short sentences like “I screamed.” to make the story suspenseful and scary. The last two sentences also pack a punch showing the fear of the main character. I do wonder what was the frightening thing in the castle. Keep writing!
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