The castle

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2 Responses to The castle

  1. Sandrine Team 100WC says:

    Oh! That must be some castle you visited! well done on building the scary parts in your story.

  2. Fern Tan (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Fatima! That is quite a fright to have while out collecting leaves. I like how you used short sentences like “I screamed.” to make the story suspenseful and scary. The last two sentences also pack a punch showing the fear of the main character. I do wonder what was the frightening thing in the castle. Keep writing!

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