Seems you had a very strange day! I love how you made the scene seem quite theatrical! I can imagine how you felt after that! The word ‘frozen’ you used to describe your parents is very nice. Keep on the good work!
So cool Maryam I really like how you described the scene, and how you described your parents as frozen, really gives me a shiver down my spine, spooky.
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